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microchenny
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 23:12 |
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Race: Gremlins Alignment: Evil Main Overview:Disloyal and distrustful, gremlins inhabit the dark, damp areas of Elveron that others are unable or unwilling to survive in. Awkward and deformed in appearance, and covered with misshapen armour scraps stolen from ancient enemies, gremlins actually tend to be surprisingly nimble and skilled warriors. Previously in living in what can only be described as small tribal units, unable to unite due to their aggressive and disobedient nature, the gremlins have recently merged into larger banding that pose a far greater threat than they once did to mere lone passers-by. Now as they gather in the gloom, strengthening their forces and focusing their power, Elveron lies unsuspecting of the new evil power that will soon be unleashed upon it... Bonuses and Penalties:-5% land gains 5% of the enemy's resources are raided on every successful non-bottomfeeding attack 1% of the enemy's peasants are kidnapped on every successful non-bottomfeeding attack Military:Code: Name Att. Def. Ret Trn Cas Mages Spies Price Bandit 4 1 12 9 100% 450g Renegade 4 9 100% 500g Enraged Looter 8 3 10 12 100% 1350g,75r Rusted Scavenger 6 6 12 12 100% 1175g,450r Tribal Shaman 9 1 1000g Shadow Thief 1 12 9 10% 1 1100g Minion 100g
- Shadow Thiefs are better at stealing resources than other spies. SpellsRevenge of the Shadows -WAR ONLY, OFFENSIVE, INSTANT - Kills one worker of the enemy for every 5 Shadow Thiefs at home. Max of 500 workers killed per cast.
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microchenny
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 23:29 |
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Joined: Mon Nov 14, 2005 02:29 Posts: 639
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ok so this is pretty much my goblin race from a long time ago, but renamed gremlins.
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homerbadman
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 00:14 |
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Joined: Sat Aug 18, 2007 03:13 Posts: 825
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spell isn't a self spell, should be war only, one time
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Graduated Plum
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 01:10 |
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Joined: Sun Oct 01, 2006 15:52 Posts: 3032 Location: ...in a purple jellybean.
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One Time spells imply that the spell is used when you attack. I don't think it's meant for that. If it's like how I think it is, it should be WAR-ONLY, OFFENSIVE, INSTANT?
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microchenny
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 00:33 |
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Joined: Mon Nov 14, 2005 02:29 Posts: 639
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Graduated Plum wrote: One Time spells imply that the spell is used when you attack. I don't think it's meant for that. If it's like how I think it is, it should be WAR-ONLY, OFFENSIVE, INSTANT? your right. i changed it. anything else?
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homerbadman
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 04:25 |
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Joined: Sat Aug 18, 2007 03:13 Posts: 825
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what about ther weakness?...... brightlight brightlight!
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microchenny
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 08:30 |
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Joined: Mon Nov 14, 2005 02:29 Posts: 639
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homerbadman wrote: what about ther weakness?...... brightlight brightlight! what do you mean by that? they have pretty balanced pricing, and the -5% land gains should throw off the bonuses.
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Graduated Plum
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 08:35 |
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Joined: Sun Oct 01, 2006 15:52 Posts: 3032 Location: ...in a purple jellybean.
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Question on name. How can a simple offensive elite be on par with the God of Fire. Plus one of my favorite summons.
_________________ I want the public schools to leave my children alone. No condoms, no heterosexual ed. Under the guise of sex ed, public schools are trying to instill un-Catholic views into our children. The public schools, and the gay lobby, want access to MY CHILDREN.
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microchenny
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 01:37 |
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Joined: Mon Nov 14, 2005 02:29 Posts: 639
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Graduated Plum wrote: Question on name. How can a simple offensive elite be on par with the God of Fire. Plus one of my favorite summons. haha yeah, im not gonna lie. im pretty bad with names, and don't really even know what a gremlin is. i sorta just took my goblin race and inserted gremlin in where it was previously goblin. and he is definitely my favorite summon. do you have a suggestion for a better name?
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Sacramento Tzar
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 03:15 |
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Joined: Mon Mar 15, 2004 04:57 Posts: 3912 Location: Sacramento, Ca
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How about "Enraged Looter" instead of Ifrit and "Rust Armored Warrior" instead of Armored Knight? Knights aren't exactly something that comes to mind when I think of Gremlins and both of those
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homerbadman
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 03:39 |
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Joined: Sat Aug 18, 2007 03:13 Posts: 825
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how about they only consume food at night, but then twice as much... they only eat after midnight of course. and brightlight kills them, so I thought a power fluctuation between day and night like that of vamps would be good. If trying to keep on course with them actually being gremlins.
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microchenny
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 04:21 |
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Joined: Mon Nov 14, 2005 02:29 Posts: 639
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homerbadman wrote: how about they only consume food at night, but then twice as much... they only eat after midnight of course. and brightlight kills them, so I thought a power fluctuation between day and night like that of vamps would be good. If trying to keep on course with them actually being gremlins. damn. didn't think gremlins would be so complicated. well i REALLY want to keep things insanely simple though, just slightly more complicated than humans. oh, and i took the liberty of using wiki to figure out what a gremlin actually was and other stuff to like goblins and imps and stuff.
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homerbadman
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 05:33 |
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Joined: Sat Aug 18, 2007 03:13 Posts: 825
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microchenny wrote: oh, and i took the liberty of using wiki to figure out what a gremlin actually was and other stuff to like goblins and imps and stuff. watch the film :-)
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Witch King
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 07:20 |
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Joined: Thu Oct 21, 2004 04:05 Posts: 4526 Location: Charging into hell with his fishing pole
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homerbadman wrote: microchenny wrote: oh, and i took the liberty of using wiki to figure out what a gremlin actually was and other stuff to like goblins and imps and stuff. watch the film :-) which brings up another question are gremils copy written?
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Sinistrad
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 07:59 |
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Joined: Wed Aug 01, 2007 21:51 Posts: 172
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doubtful...though Im sure if you try to use them as a title to a game, movie book ect then you are violating something in some way but as use as a race of monsters then I dont think there is an issue. I mean you can still use Dragons as a race and there is Dungeons and Dragons.
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