Race: Falcom
Alignment: Evil

Main Overview:
The Falcons flew in the sky killing anything in there path. The Falcons hunted on human teritory and nothing really happened, the humans didnt take them as a threat untill one day the Falcons killed all the game the humans would eat. The long bowmen shot half there race and the Falcons where left to starve. It took awile but the Falcons got all of the race back. The Falcons from that point on swore to get revenge and destroy all of the good races.

Bonuses and Penalties:

300 magic dust for having more than 1000 silver falcons

10% magic dust decay



Military:

Silver Falcons can have 10 more troops to train after a successful attack on a human, but it takes of 10 of your other military in your kindom

Spells
Ravens Rage - WAR ONLY, INSTANT - destroys .5% of enemys food supply

rebirth - SELF, ONE-TIME - get 100 extra Silver Falcons

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You know some things in life are better left unsaid... Kita stop ripping up the couch... IM SCREWED

umm can we say Gryphons?

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"LUF says
mini-freud says : you have repressed aggresivity"

"LUF says
Mini-freud asks you about your mom. Critical attack! You take 999 damage. You die. Mini-freud wins 4 exp. points. Mini-freud found a wallet."

this will not get in due to it being tied in to humans so much.

one way to make them more likly to be put in is if you made them good alignment. this will alow the + and - agenst humans but mean that it is only a miner issue as their is no attak bonus agents the same alignment.

and also
in the creation guide by Sacramento Tzar
" f) Don't have your race do anything that specifically depends on another race. This includes attack bonuses. Because the races rotate, you can't be certain that the race that you want your race to hate will be there next round (or the round after). Besides, the admins have expressed negative opinions about such race specific bonuses. "

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I will not apologise for my spelling. I reserve the right to spell appallingly at all times. I may apologies if it can not be understood and is commented on politely.

so be careful how you coment I have a fund ready for leagl action at any time

A few things pop to mind right away. First, all of the troops are too expensive. Lesser troops for example average 150-160gold per point of power but yours cost more than 500 which is more than what elites run for.

Second, bonuses against specific races arn't used in this game as a general rule. You might need to drop the human based bonus/penalty.

Third, I don't quite get the Silver Falcon 'bonus' that you get when you attack a human. Are you saying you get free troops if you attack a human? Even if that can be balanced, perhaps it should be against all good races not just humans.

Fourth, that spell the 'conjures' Silver Falcons is going to have to be very expensive or it will be overpowered.

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http://www.imaginarydaughter.com = Funny weird webcomic that I recently found and that I think you should check out as well. Personally I can't wait to see where it goes next.

PS. Thanks to LUF for making me this imaginary daughter avatar.

It took me too long to edit :$

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I will not apologise for my spelling. I reserve the right to spell appallingly at all times. I may apologies if it can not be understood and is commented on politely.

so be careful how you coment I have a fund ready for leagl action at any time

can i ask what your smoking? 1500g for a spec... um....

you forgot the 10 md

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"LUF says
mini-freud says : you have repressed aggresivity"

"LUF says
Mini-freud asks you about your mom. Critical attack! You take 999 damage. You die. Mini-freud wins 4 exp. points. Mini-freud found a wallet."

worst race ever

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WARNING: Quaffles is a whiny bitch, and he will complain to adminz if you say anything negative about him in your signature.

Grrr....he's back.

*trashs post*

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I want the public schools to leave my children alone. No condoms, no heterosexual ed. Under the guise of sex ed, public schools are trying to instill un-Catholic views into our children. The public schools, and the gay lobby, want access to MY CHILDREN.

oh noes, 66 magic dust gained or lost?!?

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Anger not the dragons, for thou art crunchy and tasteth good with ketchup.

*dies*

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I want the public schools to leave my children alone. No condoms, no heterosexual ed. Under the guise of sex ed, public schools are trying to instill un-Catholic views into our children. The public schools, and the gay lobby, want access to MY CHILDREN.

Homigawd, that can affect the outcome of whether I can use an Hourchange to get my troops back faster! -Has over 3 million golds sitting away at 500 land.-

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tuco: i tell you what. post here your picture, info about your IQ, education and social status ~ job ~ income and i will tell you how your gf looks like ok?

Storm fcking Stepper.

just one person tell me everything i have to change so i can do so and then ill fix the race

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You know some things in life are better left unsaid... Kita stop ripping up the couch... IM SCREWED

idk what i do once i get the hang of it ill get a race right sometime

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You know some things in life are better left unsaid... Kita stop ripping up the couch... IM SCREWED

Hmm.. I have a better idea. How about you read the feedback and deside on your own how you want to fix the race based on the feedback you choose to accept? This is YOUR racial suggestion so you should be the one to fix it. The interaction between you and multiple people giving you feedback is what is going to make or break the race. Don't expect one person to come in and tell you 'everything' you have to change so you can do it and then fix the race and then at that point the race is perfect and won't need to be changed again. It doesn't work that way.

If you havn't already, please read my stickied thread about race suggestions on this board.

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http://www.imaginarydaughter.com = Funny weird webcomic that I recently found and that I think you should check out as well. Personally I can't wait to see where it goes next.

PS. Thanks to LUF for making me this imaginary daughter avatar.