Race: serpents
Alignment: Evil

Main Overview:
serpents have laid in the dark watching and waiting for the perfect time to strike. One day they dicided to come and gather together and make a plan to destroy all that is good. finally after 50 years of planing in the dark abyss, they took the plan to action and made there own race, serpents. They destoryed buildings, crops, and even people, but the things that stood in there way were the good races, shinobis, spirits, elementals as far as the eye could see were lineing up. The war between good and evil have started.

Bonuses and Penalties:
-.5 food decay

-.5 magic dust decay



Military:

basilisks sometimes destroy .5 of your food at random

If the black serpent is unsuccessful in 3 spy operations you lose 5 extra


Spells
serpent strike - WAR ONLY, INSTANT - destroys 5% of the enemies food
dragons breath - SELF, INSTANT - restores heros health by 2

Building Differences:
highgrounds (Tower) Mountain

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heres my race hope you like it if you see any problems leave a list but only 1 person. Thank you

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Apparition(spirits)- Attack:1.0 Defense:2.0 cost:300g
Momba(serpants) - Attack:1.0 Defense:2.0 cost:275g

raise the price of your momba and serpant



Snow Bear(frost zorb)- Attack:4.0 Defense:0.0 cost:500g
Cobra(serpants)-Attack:4.0 Defense:1.0 cost:450g

Snow Bear doesn't even have the as good a casualty as Cobra...or have as much defense like the Cobra...cobra needs price raising




the Cobra, Momba, and Serpant...im assuming on the return time you meant 9.0 hours not .9 right?



forget the 2.0 spy and mage...1.5 at the very highest...and there price needs to be moved up a ton; like maybe 1000 gold for 1.0 spy and mage




the snake worker might be priced too high but im not gonna try to calculate all out and see if it is balanced to that much detail







could you be more specific? is it random or is there a certain % it will happen every hour change?




the Flameweavers already have Cave and it is located in the mountain just like your race...even though yours is a tower and Flameys is a home you might want to change it


Cool concept you just need help balancing it all and i will think of some building names

his worker is a bit more expensive which balances some of the prices you said were too high

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ok is that it i changed what you guys said so what do u think now

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looks ok i guess...spells might be fine but im never good at those

and instead of Black Serpant for your spy, maybe something else? you already have serpant for something else

ok then

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anything else

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aj1t1 watch how you compare races...
I've seen a couple of people comment directly without looking at bonuses...

The spirits Apparition is trained directly from peasents (avoiding the worker cost) and your worker is more expensive...

I would boost the attack or defence rather then play the cost but its your choice...

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your serpent strike spell needs more information. You have it listed as ONE TIME - I assume this means that you need to attack to use it and it applies to the defender, but you dont say that. Also - is it EVERY resource that it hits 5% of? if so it will need to be costed high, seeing as they cant defend it using mages because you actually cast it on yourself (because it is ONE TIME).

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anything else

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Name Att. Def. Ret Trn Cas Mages Spies Price

Serpent 2 2 14 9 100% 0.0 0.0 300g
constrictor 0 6 0 9 100% 0.0 0.0 500g 50l
cobra 8 2 14 9 75% 0.0 0.0 1325g 125r
Royal
cobra 0 0 0 9 0 2 0,2 2000g 50md
Black
Mamba 5 1 14 9 45% 3 0 4000fd 11 RUNES
snake 0 0 0 ? 0% 0 0,1 75g

That was the easy part. now pay attention: all troops are trained from snakes except serpent and snakes witch are directly trained from egs.
Black Mamba has a 20% chance to assasinate a enemy hero while in kingdom service, and 10% ... in realm service. (2mamba=2 heroes and so on).
Eggs do not produce gold and do not consume food.
All snakes gather food on any atack or defence.(less but does it in bottomfeding atacks).

Building diferences: They can't build farms.
Nest (home)- swamp
Sun heated stone(tavern)-swamp
Can't build slave pit.
The serpents eat less food then normal and gather food instead of slaves.(raids)

Spells: Canibalize- SELF Instant- 500 eggs are transformed into 5000 food
Poison Bite- Self Once- poisones all snakes thus inflicting more damage > 50& more casualties on battlefield > more food

You might ask for the big returning time. They do not walk, fly or ride, instead they crowl so this could be rebalanced with a -50& exploration cost. They depend a lot on atacks for food so there is no way to stik to exploration only.

The Black Mamba will spice a little the game and rebalance the hero partyes. Killing a Black Mamba will result in getting a common hero, while killing 2 BM's in the same atack may result in a rare hero. (or 2 heroes whatever)


P.S. Sory for taking over your race and tearing it apart. That is the reason i posted here. fell free to coment this race